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title: CV Feedback Victor
created_date: 2024-10-24
updated_date: 2024-10-24
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# CV Feedback Victor
- Too dense: reaction: shiiish I have to read all of this?
- like: brackets with 
- shorter, more condensed text:
	- played essential role --> developed
	- hundereds --> 100+
	- key points in experience: show skills that were important
	- usability testing: thats all they need to know
	- main experience, make
- Headline
- Education: add master thesis title
- usability testing (remove end user)
- too much detail if not another drone company?
	- instead of magnetic angle sensor say sensor to firmware
	- maybe system engineering (Victor)
- show impact: percentage! Use Keywords that HR understands
- use keywords of the job description
- 

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make sure cv shows that I'm independant